September 7, 2006

My Dilemma...

I wish it didnt
but it does
I wish I wasnt
but I am
I wish you werent
but you are
I wish you'd STOP
but you wont

I wish I wouldnt
...wish I couldnt
...know I shouldnt

©Diamond Hawkins 9.7.06

16 comments:

low said...

lol..nice..

uzo said...

Hmm.....Shouldnt what? Wouldnt what? Cant what?

TaureanMinx said...

I feel you girl. lol

DiAmOnD hawk said...

Madam Reporter (aka Uzo)...u don come again o...why cant u be like Low...nice...or like TMinx and say "you feel me"...no o...your own is to query...lol

Olawunmi said...

i like this one. the progression is really good.

i like..

Uzo said...

Wellllllll. I cant feel you if i dont know what this is all about. For all i know, it could be a poem about food. You shouldnt eat the chocolate. U wont like yourself when the bar is all gone. You cant be eating more chocolate. U shouldnt want to eat the chocolate.

It could be about anything so i want to know what's its about before i decide if i feel you or not. LOL

LondonBuki said...

LOL @ Uzo. It's true, it could mean anything from food to a man to an expensive item... LOL!!!

I like though.

Enjoy ur weekend.

Life through rose-tinted glasses said...

hmmm i wonder what the peom is about pray diamond do tell.

Onya Baquebeich said...

@uzo, thats the beauty of it, it could be anything. the vagueness allows it to be as individual as can be.

Soul said...

okay I've been reading thispost like everyday since you wrote it.

I like the way it tastes, I hope you understand what I mean??...

nice one!.

ExtrovertedPrude said...

hmmm, me likes alot!.

nyjaguy said...

short, creative, simple, highly-relatable
(just made that up, I think) and nice. Great one!

Diamond said...

@Delot...you got it in one!

@Soul...thank you for gracing my page with your presence...and yes...I understand

@NyjaGuy...se u have me down for the Okin...im not joking o...u wont come out from J-H if u dont bring it!!! :-)

The Life of a Stranger called me said...

mmmhh Interesting..

diamond said...

mmmm...@Life...lol...im just wondering what's going thru your mind...pray tell

The Life of a Stranger called me said...

@diamon LOL LOL mmmmmhhh.